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I can never describe myself with acuity. My self descriptions are always too subtle, or too passionate, or sound like I am trying too hard to make someone believe in a way of life, which is me. But I will give some generic "likes" of mine. I love the band The Matches. I love music in general. Mostly alternative rock/pop rock/indie rock. I play ice hockey and I've been playing for 10 years. I draw, I paint, I love art and going to museums. I love to hang out with friends. I enjoy being under the influence. I love to sail. I love to go to the gym. I really like adderall. I have extreme A.D.H.D. and recently found out that I have bipolar disorder, but I'm not so sure that I believe it. I love sushi, I LOVE to travel and have been all over the world. And I love New York City.

  • Member since March 27, 2007.
  • I am a 18 year old girl from Connecticut (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm Being a senior in High School.
  • I have 70 comments, 12 poems

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    I took your smile / to mean everything / so I woke to it every morning / as lips pulled back / revealing the white / enameled dawn / Cherry blossoms mark / a year's worth of secrets / and
  • I gasp for air at allpoetry
    I gasp for air to salvage myself a moment / a scene / a scent / I breathe it in deep, / so it gets into my blood stream / to mix with my DNA / to encode itself on me / in me / through me / so that someday my
  • Midday revelations at allpoetry
    Midday revelations / Come with the warming of the sun / Like the appreciation I lack / Or the art I have not produced. / Streaming hopefulness / Steady consciousness / Peaceful and serene / My thoughts still com

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  • on untitled by , on December 22, 2007
    thanks for the comment!

  • I love it

    although I'm not sure what "schmaltzy" means, I can timidly say that this poem is not "schmaltzy" but sweet, and soft and brilliant. I really enjoyed reading it and it made me feel peaceful and satisfied. Good job on this.