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Irma Vep. An Infernal Introduction.

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A voluptuous cipher
Lifts her velvet lids -
Cast in crimson,
Irises dilate.
Her bosom deflates
Softly exhaling
Dust.
An enigma wreathed
In wisps of satin.


She raises wooden covers
And slips silently
From her brass-handled bed.
And like dissipating mist
Pierced by spears
Of sunlight,
She disappears
From her arched masonic
Sanctum.


Dim-lit corridors echo
With the memories
Of dead portraits.
She pauses to regard
A rotting mildewed
Arras; depicting
Conquest
And loss
Of warrior kings;
Chivalrous killers,
Her stern-visaged
Mustachioed forefathers.


Dockyard quays
Feed the flagstoned streets
With a saline breeze;
And a merchant seaman
Drunk with shore-leave.
Instinctively seeking the Wet,
He lies prone
Clogging sewage in the gutter.
Above him,
Beneath the crooked eaves
Of crumbling gables,
Something flutters.
A feral snout
Twitches.


For behind the stringent
Reek of piss
And rum
A heart yet young
And robust thumps
In rhythmic slumber.
Rheumy eyes secreted shut
Do not see
The lithe shape
Glide to the cobbles
And land
Before his hobnailed boots,
With scarcely a whisper
Of leather.


A sailor gasps.
An adoring kiss
Clasps his jugular
Necklace
And pulls.
His barrel-chest heaves
As an unbearable weight
Lies astride his soul.
A clawed torso
Writhes.
A red stripe
Smears the moonless night.
Streaks of scarlet


Are drawn from
Shreds.
Magenta ribbons
Like serpents in a stream
Join the foul conflux
Flowing.
Bobbing cabbage heads,
One with tufts
Of dirty blond curls;
Slapping against the iron grate
Filtering dross
To feculent realms
Beneath the town.


Full
She absconds
With yet another
Waistrel life
That nobody will miss.
Least of all the last
Doxy from whom he purloined
A cuddle and a cup
Of breast.
Or the captain
Of the schooner
Used to leaking crew
Everytime
A shoreline hove into view.


The carnal cryptic
Femme fatal
Belches blood
And smiles
At the twinkling lights
High above
And far



Below.

Author notes

A dark dame of the night flits through my pseudo-subconscious mind leaving behind juice of the Muse to purloin. Is it prose posing as poetry? Farce masquerading as suspense? What does Irma Vep really mean? This is based on a delectable character from a French film made in 1915. A piece from this humble narrator in a somewhat different vein.

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  • Mart
    October 28, 2006
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    Epic!

    My word. Gothic, gargantuan, graphic and gorgeous vampire verbiage - for all the right reasons. Sumptuous fair indeed my dear gG!

    The presentation is spot on; nightmares will abound from the picture alone. Then, the imagery conveyed in your beautiful prose, captures the claustrophobic intensity of Stoker and not forgetting, those old Hammer horrors. I can see Christopher Lee now, mouth slowly opening, fangs revealed, tipped in fresh crimson, smiling to himself as he reads this. Actually, it's more Lugosi than Lee, but some may not remember the former.

    For all the intensity, I so enjoyed the final stanza - almost playful but in such sinister fashion.

    This is faultless; perfect.

    Mart  

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    • gnosisonG silver member
      October 28, 2006
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      Thanx so much Mart.

      Your array of recent uplifting comments is very much appreciated, Mart. I will return the favour as soon as I can!
      Stoker is of course an inspiration for anyone delving into vampiric lore. And I suppose the nearest I can come to a visual inspiration or feel (apart from the still-pics I`ve seen from Les Vampires) is Nosferatu - the pale pointy-eared bugger in the German silent flick.
      The problem is none of these actually evinced grrrrl power and to counter this dearth of active female protagonists Irma Vep fits nicely.
      But neither in Les Vampires or in a french film about making a film called Irma Vep from 1986 I think was Irma Vep an actual vampire.
      What makes this fun is basing a real vampire on the mistress of disguise/jewel thief foibles etc of the original. The challenge is to proffer valid reasons within a bloodsucker context to why she acts the way she does. In Irma 2 The Sacrificial Lamb I expound on her reasons for jewel theft. In the third Irma (I`ve just completed) there`s a twist to her penchant for disguises.
      Cheers again for the comment mate. It gives me a chance to formulate a sound foundation for further ghastliness. There is no better impetus to write more than such positive feedback. Maybe I`ll start on 4 tomorrow!
      Cheers
      thrombosisonG


  • October 13, 2006
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    Astoundingly beautiful

    This is a most brilliant write. Telling a chilling tale with such noble poetic ability. Keeping the reader glued to the screen wanting to know the outcome, feeling the same thirst and need as your subject.

    Truely a wonderful read.

    Rosemary

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    • gnosisonG silver member
      October 13, 2006
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      Cheers Ms du Preez

      Thank you so much for your kind comment. May I be so bold as to direct your attention to the second installment of Irma Vep - The Sacrificial Lamb, which attempts to flesh out character and setting. I`m working on a third episode but the writing constantly threatens to burst into formal prose. A tight rein is required for this femme fatale it seems. I`m not entirely sure where I have her.
      Sincere regards
      gG


  • Nienna Colle
    September 9, 2006

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    gG you infuriate me. everything I've read of yours is so insanely awesome. the only thing I have to say: typo in line 89 . sorry, the only way to stay (somewhat) sane is to find some errors. though that's really the only one, the writing is magnificent. It put me in mind of a book I read once that is definitely one of my favorites. creepy...i love it
    Nienna
    PS I really loved that it seemed to almost rhyme at times, but maintained also its own style, going back and forth as it chose...

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    • gnosisonG silver member
      September 10, 2006
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      Sanguine gratitude, Nienna

      For your kind words and for spotting the (gasp!) typo. Please don`t ever be sorry! The guilty synapse has been promptly sucked out of existence - a dyslexic Freudian slip that nobooby will miss!
      I tried to make the rhyme as inciDENTAL as possible and allow the tale to tell itself.
      I`ve half a mind to serialise Irma Vep as was done in the original french film. Irma `anagram` Vep was the boss of a gang of ghoulish jewel thieves plaguing Paris in 12 installments. I enjoyed writing this. Is there a basis for "The further adventures of...", Nienna? I would value your opinion.
      Fangx again
      thrombosisonG


      • Nienna Colle
        September 10, 2006
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        typos are the devil, in my opinion...so hard to avoid when one is intent on posting their poem...

        I definitely think it would be a great thing to "serialise" Irma...sounds hugely intriguing...! Let me know!
        Nienna


  • September 8, 2006
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    Vivid

    You convey a powerful stench of the macabre; malevolent brooding decay and with an excellent line, progression through it. I can't find any line that doesn't work, a very effective piece.


    • gnosisonG silver member
      September 10, 2006
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      Cheers Craig

      Thanx for reading and commenting. Appreciate it.
      gG


  • celestialpie gold member
    September 8, 2006

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    Dave said this put him in the mind of Poe, but I felt it was more like horror/noir-- but I guess that makes sense if it's based on a 1915 French film character.  Delicious atmosphere, delectable plot, and, as always, thrilling and palpable imagery.  I would love to see what you do with fiction.  

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    • gnosisonG silver member
      September 10, 2006
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      Fangx so much, Celestial

      I did enjoy writing this though it screwed up my keyboard writing it out in my own blood. Not doing that again! I`m thinking of writing more of Irma (as the french original also had 12 installments). Do you think there`s a basis for this?
      Warmest regards,
      thrombosisonG


      • celestialpie gold member
        September 11, 2006
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        12 installments of Irma-- absolutely!  It could be the anti-Zodiac.  

  • dave ochs silver member
    September 7, 2006
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    your killing me gG

    never againg will i feel secure in a drunken stupor ambling down cobblestone streets in the wee hours of the morn looking for a lady of the night, lest i wind up a blood sucked carcass that no one misses.

    from now on after the bar, i go straight home.

    smatterings of Poe only better.
    dave

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    • gnosisonG silver member
      September 8, 2006
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      I know what you mean. This could be an analogy for one of those wasted and I mean totally wasted evenings whereupon one awakens early next morning with a splitting hangover in a puke stained bed beside a hideous harridan, clit the size of your dick, smoking a fat Havana and nudging you with a come-hither wink. You`d punch her in the mouth and make a run for it but find your wrist handcuffed to the bed railing, and just then all thoughts become acutely focused on the seering agony, like giving birth to a mammoth-turd, flooding your rectum and...
      Well I guess you catch my drift, Dave. Oh and this never happened to me personally you understand, it was a friend of mine who...

      • dave ochs silver member
        September 8, 2006
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        hey gG

        your have great potentail to write horror. the imagery of your respone to Irma Vep will give me nightmares. thanks
        dave


  • Windhover silver member
    September 7, 2006
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    'Your anagrams are showing Dr. Lecter..."

    Sumptuous fare , the pen filled with red ink not for the first time. The imagery , the story, the language all brilliant as always and a great read even at this ungodly early hour. Surprisingly straightforward for this writer..unless this reader missed something ! Nosferatutheless one of your better ones I thought - which is praise indeed.

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    • gnosisonG silver member
      September 8, 2006
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      Till Death do us Body Parts

      Yes, apart from smatterings of hermetic symbology this is more straightforward fare.
      Girls wakes up feeling horny; goes to town. Girl meets boy - who fills her up. Girl goes home.
      Not even a hint of a lesbian tryst to tarnish the PG rating. By the way, Windhover, this is my latest write with Concentrate being the previous one (otherwise there`s no chronological sequence). Perhaps this means I`m heading in a more (gasp!) commercial direction. One for the kids as it were.
      Perhaps Sharepoe is curing me of my penchant for enigmatic involution?
      Either that or my dotage is showing!
      gG

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