crashed out of college
couldn't absorb all the knowledge
I kept crashing out
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ !!!!
Author notes
Penned on the chatterbox with a drunken English student who kept falling asleep as we tried to collaborate on a poem online.
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Nice!!!
The simplicity and directness of your work is the very reason i keep a look out for your poems. I....I...zzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!
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Simple I do well!
It comes naturally ! Thanks for the kind words and the 'z's ! Siesta rules !
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Love haikus.
LOve haikus, for their simplicity and for being as a word picture.
I like it and I readed it a couple of times and surely going to read it again.It makes me laugh.
I ve read beautiful Haikus at poetry.com (....)
I invite you to critique my freewrite.Not alowed to submitt poems...could you believe it!!
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Wide awake.
Bird, your 19-syllable little wonder is a treat. You think it pertains only to students? As a teacher in a classroom for fhgbf&#*! years, many is the time, listening to booorrrring student papers, I zzzzzzzzzed. I ouch at the memories.
Ciao and Sayonara!
Lad Si.
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Sweet 17
Ex-CUSE me! I count 'couldn't ' as one syllable(my poetic license is fully paid up and has only one endorsement). And the zzzs have none . Ergo 17 . Not that it matters as long as you got a giggle! -
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OK, mate
Bird, 17 'tis. But I'm notifying the Poetic License Police to launch an investigation.
Cheers! and ciao.
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Was I there that day?
Can't stop laughing. Love it. Perfect. You guys crack me up. This is priceless. -
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No Sis , you weren't around. Truth to tell, neither was SS for most of the conversation it seems. It WAS very funny.
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Masterpiece!
You'll give everyone the wrong idea!
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You can't be objective!
Since when you weren't crashed out over your computer you were supposed to be collaborating on this. When are you going to post our first 'masterpiece?!' LOL !
Actually I really hope people DO get the wrong idea. It would be a feather in my cap and a nail in the coffin of 'Windhoverman' s arch-rival and nemisis - THE SILVER SPECTRE ! ( Cue the 'dan de-de-dan dan-daaaan music)
I should have dedicated it to the chatterbox and all the fun it can be.
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