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Hold on! Wild ride ahead!

Hold on cowboy!
That bull has you by the horns.
Hold on! Hold on!

Cowboy up! Time to go.
Going to be one wild wild ride right here in the wild West!
Time to go!

Yeeeehawwww! What a show.
Time to ride!
Time for a show!

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  • jewell
    February 23, 2007
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    cute!

    I just love the flow! It's aressting piece too. you just want to know how it ends. good one!