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Love

It's funny how
When you fall in love
You don't know it
Or you don't want it

When love finds you
It's amazing for a while
Especially when your love
Is returned for the first time

When you fall in love
With a friend it is awkward
But then there's understanding
More romance than ever before

When you fall in love
With someone your parents disapprove
There's excitement
The fear of getting caught

If you never fall in love
There is lonliness
A saddness you never
Though existed

If your love isn't returned
By the one you care for so
There's resentment
So much bitterness toward them

It's funny how
When you fall in love
They don't want it
Or know it

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  • lexiconsthedevil
    March 15, 2007

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    so truthful

    i realy love this poem. it touched me. because i was inlove with a friend that`paarents disapproved of and my love was never returned. but other wise your writting is nearly perfect!
    keep it up!