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You

You relay like a cloud
  always floating
drifting
changing
You respond like the rain
with light sprinkles
or flooding
You create confusion
and surround your family with it
Your proud of your silence
and unresponsive ways
You don't relate your actions
with words or feelings
Unable to mirror relate
or empathise.

Please tell me what you think

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