It's undeniable,your making me maniacle.
My moods irrational
I know these things are undesirable
Your rejection leaves me miserable
Realizing it's just crazy,that it took this long for your actions to faze me
When you yet again leave me,it still dazes me
As I watch you go
I can't hide my anger,because my weaknesses are starting to show
Feeling so vulnerable,as you know I'd give you just about anything in a heartbeat
I'm still wondering,if on my knees is where you want me to go?
Why can't you just Love me?
For some reason I'm not good enough for you to let it flow
It'll serve me right when I reap what I sow
Trueblueliberty
Please tell me what you think
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Don't worry she will come back for the third time, because she came to you already twice.
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Thanks!
I am the she,I was bitching about a him.It was wrote awhile back,and He's thankfully gone.Thanks anyhow for the optimism and input
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Nice flow, great sentiment
I like the rhythm and tone of the poem.
April 13, 2007