tears of inner’s depth fall
from silent thought
gathered within open palm
they lift on rays of sun
onto parched terrain they'll fall
feeding hunger’s need…
Please tell me what you think
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Frans, I sense deep compassion in this brief poem. Its images are about the waters of sad and empathic tears that glow with care and quench the needs of the unwanted and unloved. Beautiful.
Lad. Rewarded 4
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Lad, that is exactly what I tried to put across. Thanks for your much appreciated comment. Frans.
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Lad
November 2, 2007