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Silence Softly Screaming

silence
softly screaming
:
water sky
mountains high

hearts echo eyes
trees fish birds
clouds

sing passion
into motion:

windswept dreams

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  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy silver member
    January 22
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    Hi Myra, haven't seen you for a while, I do hope you have been well

    I really liked the title of this and then read on and was amazed with your words.
    Hearts echo eyes--windswept dreams.

    A very well written smaller piece that packs a great poetic punch Myra


    Cindy


  • Gagiikwe
    January 26

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    'Sing passion into motion' Minimalist poetry often accomplishes just that, as the reader has to fill in the blanks.
    Very nicely done.