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Laugh Laugh Laugh

I am Mr. Laugh
I laugh and laugh and laugh

I dont know how to cry..
I wish i never ever try...

There is no reason why...
You can never see me shy....

I am Mr. Laugh
I laugh and laugh and laugh

I am sad but I laugh
I get mad yet I laugh

I sing a song and here I laugh
There is something wrong and here I laugh

You sing along and here I laugh
You dont catch it along and here I laugh

Hey I am Mr. Laugh
I laugh and laugh and laugh

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  • skipeople
    July 3

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    Haha, this is amusing in a way that I don't understand. . .idk. Ignore me.

    Anywho, I like it. It's a nice little diddy that could easily distract me, lol. It's a nice pick-me-upper!

    Nicely done,
    Ashley