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One Day Angels


Enticing every eyes
intoxication rules my senses
fragile kissing lips in bunches
singing songs of beauty
dancing to wind musician
fill my heart and mind deep.
They stay still in memory
Red, yellow, violet and white
welcome every morning so bright
viewing them lessens my burdens light.

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