It still sits in my room
entangled in chains
Questions its offence
and all i can tell it
is "nothing"
Time just took you away from me
and now i just can't let it go
past can't leave it .. can you?
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Hey Traveller,
Time is very strange. Sometimes we are stressed due to lack of time and other times we are bored waiting for time to pass. Here you seem to combine both of waiting for someone you want back and the stress that we are not getting younger.
Very nice poem that has a very potent twist
Bill
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Hey Bill !
How are you? Hope you are well and have all the reasons to have a beautiful smile on your face...thanks for going through this one.. Its just that at times you can't let go of things. Which is important, though you just cannot do it. thats all...
take care Bill...
Traveller
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William McGarvey
March 21