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You

Am at your door once again,
like everyday
My eyes questioning yours
do i get something today?

You smile and throw me a
few minutes of your time
share a word or two
and then look away


But the longing in my heart
to see your smile
still stays..
So here i am at your door
once again
like everyday

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this is what happens when you're not wanted where your heart is...

past can't leave it .. can you? [Reward: double points]

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  • potatoperson110 silver member
    May 23

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    I like this piece a lot, it feels so familiar. Er. Like I can relate to it. I like how the end ties back to the beginning about the door and how you're here at is once again like everyday. Makes me feel wistful, but it's very lovely.

    - SilverMilk

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  • LiveLaugh
    May 16
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    I love this. I got the idea this is about a relationship either of the past or the present, where you are putting in all you have and not getting the same feelings in response. I really like the line ' You smile and throw me a few minutes of your time, share a word or two and then look away'. Nice work, thanks for sharing.

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  • Dirty and Broken
    May 5

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    i love this piece
    reminds me of my now, my past relationship.....
    reminds me of alex and i.....
    but anyways, it's beautiful....wonderful.....

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    • Lonely Traveller
      May 15
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      thanks friend

      it was a thought just penned down...
      we come in terms with these things a lot of times... i am used to it now.. you take care... all will be well...

      Traveller