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Rebel to Everything



Intro [Instruments only]

Verse 1
Do you ever feel pushed around?
Like the entire world
is kicking you while you’re down.

Do you ever feel so small
that no matter how hard you try
it doesn’t mean anything at all?

[gunshots and screams in background]

Chorus
It’s your time to act,
and push them around.
Start kickin them
because they’re the ones down.
Don’t let this get to you,
don’t you dare miss out.
Rebel to everything,
How’s this going down?
[background scream] Rebellion!!!

Verse 2
Can you call this your home?
When everyone’s against you
forcing you to be on you own.

Can you say that you feel alive?
Now that you fight back,
you’re fighting to survive.

Bridge [mainly instrumental, some screaming stuff figure out later]
REBEL!

Solo!

Chorus

Verse 3-Roll into the outro
Through the battles you strive
while fighting perfection
with no chance to survive.
There’s no second chances here
This can’t
-this won’t-
Be the end…

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Reviews

  • hm....not sure i get the point of this song, it kinda switches all around....to me, anyways
    i like it though....i think it'll make a cool song


  • shadow2050
    June 4

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    WOW BOBBY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I LOVE IT! This was really good glad I got the whole rhyme i read it once but then I read it again with and made the noise at it sounds sooooo awesome yeah when you guys get you band together I am buying your cd when you make one lol, cause you guys are my buddy and your awesome. Well I loved it, The last stanza I love it's a really good ending.

    Well keep up the awesome writing

    Sincerely your weird friend,
    Chandra A. .C.