i thought u were being
for real- real
i thought what u were saying
was the truth
but now u claim
to not remember
the words u said to me
now u claim
u don't know
how can u do this?
how can u be so cruel?
you told me
[i'm sorry]
i asked
why?
[i failed]
and i asked how u failed
but u were already gone
and now
you don't know
what i'm talking about
and i told you
i think you're lying
but you won't admit a thing
not that i expected you to
i am worthless
{but u made me seem
so special
like i was
everything
to you}
and i don't know what to say
and i don't know what to write
but i wish i knew
i wish i knew what to say
to get you
to take me back
i wish i knew....
oh how i wish i knew....
Reviews
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I heart this!
I like this "man" ( don't be mad!!!) it is hella wicked good. omg, I feel like this everyday when everything I say is never enough for someone. when you're siting on the edge of your bed, with so much inside that it's so explosive. you wanna just get it out, be understood, it's like you wanna write, wanna draw, wanna cut, wanna run, but it's just never enough, god, I hate that feeling... anyway, I love this A++++++!!!!
-rebecca
and now you know my name
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your name in rebecca? that's amazing.....
anyways, thanks for the comment...i'm glad someone getrs what i'm writing....glad someone understand......
~Cassandra~
and now you know mine
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This is nice!
Awesome really. I like the whole feel about it, dark and questioning. You have a good style, I believe. And this poem can be related to, so that adds to the effect. I also love the way you use brackets to show the person answering, never seen that before.
Nicely done,
Ashley
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you've never seen that before? hm....interesting.....
but anyways, thanks for your commment, i really do enjoy it....
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May 7