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Mutterings of a Nearsighted

“Acts of habit make you forget.”
This I tell myself
after being startled
by my own hand
touching the skin between my eyes.

That act of adjusting
glasses now needless
when what I deal with
is right before me. Words
no longer look blurry.

Anything beyond
my grasp is now worse.
Without my plastic lenses
the world loses
sharp edges. Everything bears
a softness as if in awakening.

I could go on muttering
about how leaders of the world
could try this, and maybe find
a foggy way to world peace.

But all I probably need
is a trip to the optometrist.

-o-

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Reviews


  • Ayreon
    June 11
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    I really like this; its unexpected.

    • Sufjan
      July 2
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      Thanks Ayreon. I hope you get interested in reading my other poems.


  • oxymoron270
    August 9

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    this is cool. not what i was expecting when i started reading. really like the ending. this is amazing and unique.

    awesome job,
    adie

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