'Windows is Shutting Down'
I noticed it for some reason
It spoke to me
I lost a friend here today.
Virtuality shouldn't touch
but it does
and windows is shutting down
like part of me
the laptop lid
like a coffin
a feeling like I should put it
in the ground
before bed
say a few words maybe
The eyes are windows
to the soul
and windows is shutting down
Copy and paste me an epitaph.
I'll miss you.
I already do.
Windows is shutting down.
Author notes
Dedicated to someone who felt they had to leave.
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awww...so sad and cute
poor laptop
. it's always sad when something dies, even if it is an inatimate
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End of an Aperture.
A window closes and you open one inwards to enable your quill to write a wrong, W.
All the more poignant as I am afforded brevity of a certain insight. All the more impressive as your words meld with the melancholy this event conceives.
Highest regards
gG
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HOw interesting to put in in the degree of windows shutting down.
Don't know what to say bout this one >W<..I really liked it, different, says a lot..just kinda left silenced...in a good way
Cindy
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hey W
pretty tight, we've all seen windows shutting down but you had the werewithal to notice it and make a poem out of it. i too have felt a sense of loss albeit not a big one but there. best line...the eyes are windows to the soul...cyber meets reality.
dave. Rewarded 6
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Sentimental
Hey Professor, thanks for the feedback. I would have thought this one might be a bit flowery for you, especially the line you picked out. But it's written pretty much as it 'happened' like most of my stuff. Always glad to hear from you (I must be getting sentimental in my old age!) >W<
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