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The Earth

A creative play on words
Emotions if you choose to show it
That’s all this place is

It’s the sun and the breeze
Love and hate
And everything in between

Just a dance in the trees
The song of the breeze
Moving from screen to screen
That’s all this place is

It’s the shine and the sting
Cherry waves that we cling
To the bottom of this thing
But of something unknown
It is our queen

It’s the plays and the dance
The sun and the trees
The shines and the stings
Our minds
And your queens

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  • skipeople
    May 30

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    This has a good out take on life and (duh) the world. It is rare, as far as I've seen, for someone to go out and describe, define even, the world in such a way. This is a nice read, very smooth and anyone could agree.

    Nicely done,
    Ashley