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I Know (I Miss You)

How could one do this to another
Slap a hand that’s reaching out
Slap a face that’s sad and pout

How could one do this to another
Lead one on with warmth and care
But leaving one dry and despair

How could one do this to another
Be caring so much
While taking away the crutch

How could one do this to another
Bring out the most genuine smile
And make tears fall that rivals the nile

How could one do this to another
Leave what was true love to die
For another
With nothing
No passion
Worthless and no cares

I miss you
I love you

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