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dream

Daring to do that which others consider impossible.

Reach hieghts higher that any have climber before.

Extinguish every fear that eats away you bravery.

Accumilate a heart for adventures and thrills, now!

Make life your game, roll the dice, and move ahead.

umm....i dunno what to have you guys answer

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  • skipeople
    May 31
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    Haha, I actually kind of like it. It is like a bucketlist, only made by someone else. I think you meant "climbed" in the second line. Anywho, this isn't bad at all. You should like go back and just work on adding stuff. There are a few ideas you'd could conjure from this. I think that if you continue, you'll have something amazing.

    Keep working on it!
    Ashley