cre-e-e-k!
a cricket calls to greet me
tonight cross legged on my mattress on
my halphed 10x12 side of our tent my other
roommate just moved in from Ohio but last night
and since i've been here since Sunday
the cricket was on his side
was spacious with only the two of us now
is snug and my side
is crammed and the cricket
is bellowing somewhere amongst boxes
and bedsheets
Jimmy
sounds like a good name for my first
new tent mate Aaron
is the name of the guy who just moved in and i
will go to bed early tonight
so as not to keep him up out
of common courtesy but hopefully
he'll find the cricket as soothing a tenor
as i do.
Reviews
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Did you get bored much in that tent of yours? Haha.
I actually like this, is has a real feel to it. And I personally think Jimmy is a great name!
Much luck,
Ashley -
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as the summer goes on...
Ashley,
no, i wasn't bored when i wrote this. although i must admit that now i find my tent quite a boring place to be. thanx for the read.
best,
Pap
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Perfectly unperfect
June 20