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Dead To Me

Dead to me
What do these words mean?
Dead to me
Alive and kicking, yet somehow quieted
Erased, forgotten
Dead to me
No more failed promises
No longer waiting
Dead to me
Truth unveiled
Put behind me
Not listening
Dead to me

You are.

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  • Lake Absence gold member
    October 15

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    Why?

    Do you not like this poem? I think it's lovely! The repetition was not needed for the poem to have the same force, but overall, great job!