He is spirit and wit
Within some hearts
A voice that sits
In insightful parts
There are those who deny
That He is really there
That He doesn’t lie
In a place somewhere
Though some disagree
There are some who believe
That He is the key
To what we achieve
God might exist
Or possibly not
Maybe in our midst
Around us a lot
Perhaps imagination
Fine-tuned dream
A mind’s creation
Taken to extreme
But despite truth
He is with us all
Both elders and youth
Who decide to recall
Even if contrived
By humans back then
We bring Him alive
By saying “amen”
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amen.
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Pondering your beliefs is a good thing I think..I loved this, feelings, thoughts even opinions shared, so well
Trust he is there
Cindy
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I liked it!
It was a quick write, wasnt it? Shaping your flurry of thoughts in a in-and-out rhyming poem. Such ones are the easiest to read. Feels very, very natural.
And a lovely ending to your agnostic thought. A great way of saying that it's all about the faith one has.. Rewarded 6
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Questioning is a wonderful exercise in procreating your faith. Cheers Sister. Shalom!
callman
June 18
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