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Dreams And Tears

The taste of your lips upon mine.
The softness of your fingertips
as I touch each and everyone.
The magic of your embrace.
Finally after all these years
we are together again.
So much electricity between us
as we dance slowly to the music
of our hearts beating as one,
moving slowly towards the bed, we lay.
I trace every nuance of your body,
my eyes closed so as to have this moment
burned in my memory always.
Kissing softly, loving gently.
I want to stay this way forver.
Making love to you,
soft and sweet,
gentle and slow.
Sweat dripping from our bodies.
The smell of sweet ecstasy in the air
as time stands still.
You pull me into you
arms wrapped tightly around me
as if scared to let me go again.
We fall asleep in the magic of each other.
I awake in the morning with
a smile upon my lips,
yet my pillow is stained with tears
and I realize...
It was only a dream

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  • skipeople
    June 19

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    Okay so this is how it is....

    I love it! I really do and (just to fill you in) I'm not the kin dof person to even think about reading lovey dovey stuff like this. Yet, this amazed me. I was hooked in from the beginning and just couldn't bring myself to let go. It flows, every word in it's place. The image is clear and I was lost in a fantasy world.

    Nicely done,
    Ashley

  • nayomie
    June 20
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    i loved this so much, the ending hit me. i was getting in to a moment of pure bliss and happiness, when sudenly i'm told its nt real, the relisation of this is something which i'm sure most of us can relate to.
    i loved the imagery in the poem, as i said i actually got cauht in the moment, this makes the ending even more powerful.
    great work!