Emotional death
Denial of a feeling’s breath
You left it to die
Care to retry?
To avoid a stinging, burning sensation
Of deep emotional cremation
Blistering, painful membrane
With no form of restrain
Sizzling your thought
Making you distraught
Change your situation
Or feel emotional cremation
Reviews
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wow!! that is strong!! and yet so very sad!
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That's a big WTF! Like what the hell is with everyone out writing me?!?! I feel so alone in my little corner of suckiness.
Anywho, this is just. . .idk. I don't even feel like trying to find the words. It's just, great. =/ The ryhming, the meaning, the realtions to other people; relations to the world.
Good write,
Ash
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WOW!! all i can say is wow. you make my poetry seem like something from a 5-year-old. I love how this poem ryhmes and how it relates to other people. FANTASTIC JOB!!!
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Very good
It all works in nicly.
June 24
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