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Head Games

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Why do I listen to her
she’s fucking off her head
but the crazy ones
are always good in bed

why do I talk to her
she’s never listened
to a single word I’ve said
but the crazy ones
are always great in bed

she thinks I’m someone else
if I was dead
it wouldn’t matter
but the callous ones
are fucking great in bed

she thinks I’m stalking her
she might be stalking me instead
she’d fuck my brains out
if I ever came to bed

she hides from me
like I was looking in her diary
plays games inside her head
well
games make things more interesting
in bed



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  • Brian Balzer gold member
    September 16

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    Were you sleeping with my girlfriends?

    I think you must have been
    To do that to a buddy
    has got to be a sin
    You really pissed me off my boy
    'cause every time you'd call
    you'd interupt my girlfriend
    from sucking on my balls
    I guess I should have left her
    but I stayed with her instead
    she may have been a crazy bitch
    but she was fucking great in bed
    Now it comes down to it
    should we still be friends
    I guess that you can have her
    Since I fuck her crazy twin


  • Exoskeletal
    June 25
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    Reminiscent. But the bed ones are quite the less fun ones.

    I'm a substance seeker.

  • dave ochs silver member
    June 25
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    hey john

    ahh...you've stumbled onto a truth here. that its the crazy ones that'll fuck your brains out and whatever hell they put you through to get them in bed, you'll do it again and again, in fact you cant' help it. anyway the structure was perfect as a head post banging into a wall.
    dave


    • Windhover silver member
      June 25
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      A truth indeed...

      ...and who better to recognize and applaud it than the Professor from the University of Hard Knox ! This subject was on your curriculum too I see. It was one of my favourites. Glad the good Professor concurs with my theory! Doctor W.


  • skipeople
    June 24

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    ahhh, the wonderful mind of the male species. Haha. Is sex really all you people think about? A good reason to go lesbo. unless he's good in bed too...*thinks*

    Anywho, this is funny and kept me reading.

    Perv =P,
    Ashley


    • Windhover silver member
      June 25
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      Sex is NOT all we think of.....

      Skip, you're probably too young to be allowed read this and I'm going to have a word with the powers that be on the subject of the 'Adult' button. (joke by the way) I didn't realize lesbians didn't think about sex. Damn! There goes one of my best fantasies! I thought it was nuns - and my fantasies had hopes about THEM! You've ruined my day. >W<

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