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"Awakening"

It wasn't light,

It was dark,

It wasn't relieve,

It was regret,

It wasn't hope,

It was despair.

The awakening,

again.

It wasn't realization,

It was knowledge.

The emptiness,

after.

It wasn't me,

It was us,

It was us.

It was us...

You had to let go,

You had to say no,

You had to decide,

You had to choose.

You had me,

you had Us.

Now all you have

is the quite awakening

The Awakening of dawn

That Reasoning of yours.

what do you think? Is it too long?

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