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Poker or Pool

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You don't know me
but you'd like to
or so you think

maybe bump into me
some night when
I'm drinking
and so are you

play a hand or two
of poker
maybe a game of pool

fool around
maybe stay out
late

I should tell you
my dates
always end up behind the eight ball

your call

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  • GmH
    July 20
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    I really enjoyed this, I loved that, for me, the lack of punctuation and the rhymes here and there gave the image of the poem itself rolling along like the eight ball.
    Btw Windhover to Christ our Lord? Guess that's blown the cover of my username too..!

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  • ladydwarf silver member
    July 20

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    hmmmmmmmmm. which eight ball would that be windy? lol! like this bit of anti lonliness seeking......cute!

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