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Love, I miss you no more

why did I ever let you go?
Oh that's right
Because you hurt me so.
You told me you love me
But that was just a ploy
To have your wicked way with me
You're such a stupid boy

One girl just wasn't enough
You had another three
All of which are rough!
It's taken a while
For it to sink in
Just like our relationship
Your picture's in the bin.

I never want to see your face
The hurt and pain I feel
I am in disgrace
I guess that we are even now
You've gotten your revenge
I can only hope that I
Will learn and not avenge

how can i improve the last stanza?

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