Beneath A Crescent Moon
We speak to each other beneath the breakthrough phase of a waxing crescent moon
Love amasses beneath the cracks of a crumbing ego
Ever expanding crevasses allow the consciousness to join the spirit in holy matrimony
This accord creates a sacrament of eternal light in a dark world
There is more between us than the mere passing of words between sanctified lips
A communion has formed between God's most beloved pupils
In true Agape our ears are attuned to distinguish our common hopes
Of leading lost societies to prosper in their God given abundance
We easily recognize the Creator's image within each other
As we walk below the sliver of an extraordinarily luminous August moon
Carly Ann Seye © 2008
Reviews
-
I really liked this poem, great use of language, beautiful expression of the love between you and that other. You really captured the peace and harmony within the relationship between the two.
-
"We speak to each other beneath the breakthrough phase of a waxing crescent moon
Love amasses beneath the cracks of a crumbing ego"
This part is really good. It's like the clouds are the ego and the moon can shine once the ego is gone.
The peom has a ery great "ring" to it. I lik it so much, But those first two lines are great
August 16
Edit | Reply