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~Gone Away~

With out you here
my life's lost all meaning
Drowned by tears
for your love I'm feening

It's been 4 years
but it feels like forever
Recluse all my fears
like a buried treasure

To see you again
would fulfill all my needs
But until then
I'm left crying on my knees

Author notes

I wrote this poem 4 years after my mother passed away

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