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~The Good Times~

Time has changed
as did our love
But our time I will frame
in a portrait above

I'll remember you always
how you were once
Remember the good days
before all the fuss

I'll remember the good times
not dwell on the past
Memories kept in my mind
help the good times last

I'll make it someday
even without you here
But there won't be a day
the good times aren't near

Author notes

This poem is about me 1st love, it didn't end so good for us

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  • Lonely Traveller
    August 18

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    Beautiful

    Its so suprising that so much changes after sometime... people, hearts, intentions and so much more.. and framing them into a memory in your heart is all that u can do...this is a beautiful write.. thanks for sharing

    Travelller