Dear tomorrow
Please forget me
Dear Tomorrow
Can you hear me?
You seem so far away...........
( short guitar rift)
I'm writting to tell you
I'm not coming
Because I'm here tonight
Watching red blood.......running.....
And pain has never felt more comforting........
( 2nd riff )
So Dear Tomorrow
Do not grieve me
Dear Tomorrow
You must belive me
That in dying here tonight
I've never been more happy
In my whole life.....
( 3rd Riff )
You use to be
my only hope
and gulibull I stood here
Standing
Reaching
Out........
for your irreachable rope
( more will be added later)
I wrote this at 3:00 in the morning. I was having a really hard night, I feel asleep before I finished it, I'll finnish it tonight.
Sorry, you cannot respond to an archived poemReviews
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I dunno man, dark. But I like how you made it into a kind of declaration to tomorrow instead of the past and why your doing it...you just are doing it and it's what you want. I like the concept of telling tomorrow not to wait up, original. Not very provocative though- make me believe it.
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Aww, sounds like the kind of song you listen to after a bad day, the kind that lets you know you're not the only one who feels like crap. Like me...now, ha. The only thing I don't completely understand in the last line, teehee.
Other than that, great job, can't wait for the rest!
Ash
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I love this one to, I so understand it, its good
August 21
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