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Sun's Moon

Some sounds feel the need to shout
Aloud
Loudly
Truth you are the story
Exchanged for no glory
Liberated the die from
Lone diamond

Mental mentality lengthened far
Beyond beneath
Through potential
Versified emotional specials
No markdown on this special

Ardor for you adore
Vivid glooms doomed gloomy

Sun’s moon
Stars wait upon
Dispensed stream flowed
Rush to pump body’s blood

Temperate hands feed the
Green to this earth
Furtive sole fused universe

Various verses vent
Versatile ventures varied
Vividly vacationed vacant
Very in-depth

With-in stepped over witless ends
External shield shed

Harmony's vocabulary
Paint portraits entitled
Truth Full
Surged directly to your pulse
Pause pupils

Hence hastily Henced
Repetitively rapidly
Past death
Land dig deeper depth

Please point out strengths and weakness

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