The mind is in vacuum
nonetheless there is something to pen down…
With the thoughts getting on and off
setting me in a chaotic state,
where in one gets numb and emotionless.
There comes certain moments in your life,
when it happens so that you aren’t doing nothing,
you aren’t idle either;
for your mind is occupied into something that’s irrelevant and insignificant
however you give it all the attention
you finally end up deriving nothing through it .
You sometimes think you are insane to clatter on it over and over
but what trails off and what remains is very oblivious.
There is an inward calmness behind all the battles of life.
You revolt, you accept,
you frown, you grin,
you hate, you love,
you cry, you smile.
Thus far all you realize
there is an instinctive nature about you
that’s being enduring and forgiving
for few reasons and situations
that were inevitable or unsolvable or whatever.
I sit back and contemplate
if at those moments
if what I did was some kind of a sacrifice
or am I just succumbing to the situations in life
for the fear of some hazardous painful consequences
that would be unacceptable.
Be it what
mind simply sometimes compromises to a certain extent
when you don’t know if its right or wrong to do…
Who in the world defines the right and the wrong..
now I am not getting into the terms of spirituality
for its something I realize is within everyone
and he has to simply awaken the inner self
Self reliance is the only way
he can really become aware of its existence within himself.
Is it easier as it sounds to be?
Or is this life an ever veiling mystic journey
which we await to be unveiled until the end,
leaving it unfinished, untouched and unfelt.
Furthermore, there is an inner call,
an inner voice that says its our innate responsibility
to fathom into our own self
and get to know the mainstay of the purpose of our birth. Every individual self at an wholesome awareness
can realize it deep within himself what he is
and his whole purpose of birth.
The incarnation in his current birth is to a purpose
and he has to unravel the mysticism
behind this entire way of this living.
Otherwise,Life seems to be a constant search
until we have found that ultimate reason for our birth.
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This is a deep pool of thought.
I like your opening lines. Even though you seemingly had nothing in particular on your mind there was something in you compelling you to write. Gee that's never happened to me. Then before long your thoughts began to formulate. I've been to the state you're referring to in your first stanza, more than once. Are lines 7&8 suppose to contradict each other? It seems as though you may have intended them to but they say the same thing, I think. I can relate to the second stanza also and I understand most of it but I have a spot that isn't clear to me. Do you mean that your nature is being forgiving for "only" a few "certain" reasons or do you mean it has few reasons for being forgiving? Third stanza "ditto". Be it what- seems unfinished to me. Be it what it may? I agree with the fourth stanza although many would argue the point. The fifth asks the question to which we shall probably never truly know the answer. The third line is awkward. It's only my opinion but it seems as if it should be either - Is it as easy as it sounds to be? - or - Is it easier than it sounds to be? I'm not sure I can completely agree with the sixth stanza although I agree with the principle of it. I think some individuals are to lost, confused, angry, hurt, ect. to realize thier true meaning in life. The last two lines sum it up very well in my opinion. Very interesting considering you seemed to start out with nothing in particular to say.
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Also to mention Brian, I initially thought to title this one as Idle to the Ideal..but taking into consideration the last two lines that left my thoughts unfinished I fel this would be appropriate - "Unveil the veil"
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Woah Brian..thanks for that long thoughtful time and comments..I must say I write in things that are insane especially in times when I am completely bored and empty, yet It is during those times, that I realize I speak like I am born enlightened or born to be enlightened..whatever or whichever way it is..yeah its truly deep deeper than it sounds, its takes lot of spiritual quotient and madness to comprehend..You got it all right though
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