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I can see you clearly
But you don't seem to see me at all
Even if I was screaming
You wouldn't hear a word
Coming out of my mouth
So what can I do
To make you notice me

Should I do something
Totally out there
Change my friends
Change my hair
Change the way I dress

Sitting there with your curren victim
How could I get you
To sink you fangs into me
There must be something
Wrong with me

Should I do something
Totally out there
Change my attitude
Change the way I talk
Change all that is me

Would that make you happy at all
Would you think about
me any differently
Or would I be the same to you
Maybe I shouldn't change
A single thing about me
I just have to make you see
I'm perfect just the way I am

Should I do something
Totally out there
Change my friends
Change my hair
Change the way I dress
Change my attitufe
Change the way I talk
Change all that is me
Change nothing at all

Does it seem like lyrics to a song you'd listen to?

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