Why is to be loved
is to be hated
Why does kindness
Always lead to your demise
Why do friends turn out to be your most hated enimies
Why is truth reproduced with lies
Why is being loyal friends
seem to end in betrail
Why does life
not seem to be real
Why is dieing
never any fun
But for these questions you ask
I cannot answer one
I just want the truth of what you think
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i guess its ok but i dont like most of my stuff
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hey, you obviously have a great creativity and insightfulness especially for a person so young, this is a bit too pesimistic for me, maybe if you try look at things from different angles and percieve the things which matter and those which dont and by differentiating them you may become more perceptive to the two sides of things, betrayal for instance is a very strong word and is usually complex and distinct, this poem is very general unless you were betrayed quite personally by a single figure maybe you should try single out the simple emotion or compare it to all emotions on a grand scale, altogether you have a natural flare!
DrkAngel
September 5
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