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Courage

There is blood everywhere.
I can feel the pain.
But with every cut.
I get closer and closer,
It hurts less and less,
And soon it will be gone.
There will be no more pain.
Only one change will happen,
There will be one less person and one more angel.
I just need the courage,
The courage to stop being a burden,
To let people live a happier life,
To stop the questions and worries.
It will all be over soon.
When i get the courage,
To take the final cut.

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