Have you ever felt abandoned?
Like nobody will help?
Or they can’t?
you are the only one,
That feels this way
Only one that gets bullied
Everything happens to you,
Not anyone else
You’re a klutz and always get hurt
Can’t do anything right
Nobody understands you
Nobody thinks like you
Nobody acts like you
Nobody cares about what you do
You are standing alone
With everyone against you
But the truth is,
Its everyone by themselves
We are all alone
Were all different
It doesn’t feel like it though
In the life of a teenager
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I like the tone of this poem .I think many teenagers can relate with this one.Abandoned ,lost ,hurt ,thousands emotions that flow in our being and the worst it that we've got the awful feeling of being left behind,not wanted .
Pain and emotions ,that's what i can sense in your poem.But behind those lines ,i hear the voice of sb ,one of us that doesn't want to suffer any more.
"We are all alone
We are all different"
That's a truth we can't escape .
It's a very meaningful piece of writing for being just 14.Keep it up!
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My childhood
A lot of what your poem says describes my childhood.
Alone bullied and feeling like no one could help and sometimes like no one cared. Hang in there. -
well
i like it.
i like that you say everyone else is by themselves too. true true.
but, nothing really brought me into it...and I'm not such a free verse fan....
nice pic though
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