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she dunno

I know
It'll be okay
At least for now
It's what I'll say
cause tomorrow
could change so many things
some many ways in just one day

Oh how
can she not know this pain
Or see it on my face
As this love dies away

Can it be saved?
does she love me
As her fingers graze my skin
just to flicker back again
It's just a dream
Just a dream
I'm losing who we are
Or are we nothing at all?

I try
to see
where I began
Losing everything
all I had
but she didn't know
that all I had
was everything she meant to me


I shoulda seen the light
The moment she walked outa mine
I just don't think she understands
How this rips me open
Again and again
I suffer silently
and she's hurting me
It's killing me.......
Destroying me

I wrote this at 3:00 in the morning. I was having a really hard night, I feel asleep before I finished it, I'll finnish it tonight.

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Reviews


  • DrkAngel
    September 9
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    holy hell it is freaking sweet, I really love it.


  • DrkAngel
    September 9
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    awesome

    freaking sweet, I love it


  • Dirty and Broken
    September 12

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    reminds me of my current/previous relationship......don't know which it is- if it's my current or my previous.....*Shrugs*
    anyways, it's a really good poem, i really like it