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Good Friend

Sometimes I sit alone and cry,
then I sit and wonder why.
Sometimes I simply wish I'd die,
trust me my friend I would not lie.
Sometimes I wonder, wonder why,
why you sit here by my side.
But then it strikes me once again;
it is because you're my good friend.

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  • courage is hope gold member
    October 14

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    Aww, I like it!

    I really like it. It's simple, but it gets to the point.

    It's like my friends and me. They're always there beside me, helping me with my rough times .

    Nice job,
    Hope

    • Brian Balzer gold member
      October 15
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      I'm glad you liked it.

      It is definitly succinct. That's a fancy word I learned from Enoq that means brief. Sometimes one good friend makes all the difference. Thanks.