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What's Your Name?

Is it God,
Or Buddha,
Or Mohammed,
Or Muhammed,
Or Jesus,
Or Baal,
Or Yahweh,
Or Gaia,
Or Being,
Or Whatever,
Does it matter?
I think you are love.

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  • facethejam
    October 24

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    i like it. shows how all major religions are based on the same thing, no matter the name, tradition, or book--love.

  • Brian Balzer gold member
    September 27

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    Interesting.

    Can the name we call something change that which it is?
    Does the interpretation of a word change it's true meaning. Do poor directions change the location of a destination. No. I believe you are right. No matter what you choose to call the Supreme Being he is love.

  • Miss O Malley
    September 27

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    im not sure what to think of it since some people might say im strict in my 'beliefs', whatever that means, but i keep rereading the last two lines over and over and it just kinda spills over me. The message of this is love, no matter whatever you call your god. this is very univerasal. nicely done.