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Destiny

I am so in love with you,
But you choose to break my heart into,
I don't know why but I sit and cry,
Hoping one day you'll fall in love with me.

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  • courage is hope gold member
    October 13

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    Nice

    It's good, though I would add a little more to it to make it more "fuller". It's pretty good though!

    Keep writing,
    Hope