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I Want

I want to walk into purity,
shedding this corruption.

I want to spread my wings,
taking flight into the stars.

I want to wrap myself in rain,
and walk alone for days.

I want to do so many things…

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  • Lake Absence gold member
    October 26

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    Great job! A little short maybe, but I like it that way. It makes it that much easier for someone with a short attention span like me to read. I love it!

    Keep on writing,

    Lake.