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simple...(or is it?)

as i sit and think of all my pain. a sudden thought pops out so plain. a simple tool is needed to help me suceed, a simple cut to make me bleed. simply enough i have no fear,
to help make me eventually dissapear.

simple facts, simple acts, so many things so little laughs.i detest humor when im in my hostile ways. im burning with a fury that will make you turn away. simple feelings simple life. so i say its so simple so why am i still alive?

What do u define so simple in this poem

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