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lost without you

im lost without you. you have inspired me to live.
to keep smiling to look deep within. now your gone and im stuck to say, there is no light only shadows in my days.
smiling will cost me to think about how you made me laugh. now ur a figment of my imagination a lover from the past.
i wonder how it all ended before i could explain. this part of my memory always seems to change. we yelled and bickered, cried and screamed...so many lies it was all fake it seemed. it was unreal it turned my heart to steel...now im left to live and deal.live and learn and try to heal

have u ever been in a relationship like this?

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