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Ecstasy

Soft to the touch
Sometime just to much

The velvet feel
Of skin so real

Your tender curves my hands do explore
Reach places they’ve never been before

Brings me up I don’t want to come down
Pure ecstasy my mind has found

Two bodies dancing through the night
Continuing till stars fall with morning light

Now come to me my gentle pet
Receive pleasures you will not soon forget

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  • blazingleo
    October 13
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    nice

    The poem has a sensuous feel .If wishes were horses beggars would ride for some.