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Strong Emotions

It always seems to be

that something on TV

or something that I read

strikes a cord in me.

Then as something on my

"heart strings" is strumming

my emotions begin humming.

Sometimes I laugh

Sometimes I cry

Somtimes I don't

Quite know why.

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  • courage is hope gold member
    October 12
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    Hahaha I can relate to this

    I get my moods changed a lot for some reason... lol

    I really like it though!


  • mallam23 silver member
    October 11
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    Instead of questioning the feeling sometimes its better to just feel the feeling.

  • Broken Bambi
    October 10

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    I can relate to this, alot of thinds get me off, songs, films, books ect and most of the time I don't even know why I'm crying. Also if someone else crys, it makes me cry.

    I like the rhyming

    nice write

    • Brian Balzer gold member
      October 10
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      I'm glad I'm not the only one.

      I'm a soft hearted old soul. I have cried with complete strangers because they were crying. OH well. I'm tough enough to cry in public...and beat up anyone that laughs at me. I like to rhyme. I rhyme all the time. It just comes natural. That's quite factual. Thanks for the rose. It smells good to my nose. That was sweet, and kind of neat.

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