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{Release}

Shit happens


Looking around
seeing nothing
just death
fighting
and beating

FUCK this

I wanna just get away
Forget everything
Have no doubts
Go Crazy
just forget

I wanna cause trouble
Make people scream
Make people scared

FUCK them

I wanna fight
I wanna hurt
something
someone

But they don't deserve it
some do

Like those cowards
like those wannabes

They make me laugh

Watching them
stare at me

I hate them
I hate people

Why can't they just be
fucking real
for once
in their fucking pathetic life

they piss me off


Gahhhhhh

Need to

R
E
L
E
A
S
E

All this angry within me



Author notes

not finished just got pissed at it

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