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Hmn ... well I'm pretty new to the world of criticism about writing. Er ... something like that. But I've always liked to write and I really like poetry.

Well, okay. I'm pretty sure I'm not emo. Pretty sure. And I'm pretty sure I'm not super girly and preppy either. I guess you could say I'm a little dark, perhaps. Maybe more than a little. But I'm not that dark. Sometimes I get really hyper and my friends accuse me of having ADD and I'm really happy and stuff. Sometimes I get really impassive and write/talk about cutting and blood and stranger things. But I'm fine. I'm me. And I guess that's me in a very vague nutshell.

Alright. I don't know what to say anymore.

  • Last seen on Oct 1 10:19 PM. Member since May 17.
  • I am a 13 year old person (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm probably thinking about writing some more..
  • I have 10 comments, 7 archived poems

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  • on Cynicism Is My Religion by dave ochs, on June 30
    I like this poem a whole lot ... it reminds me of my cousin (and myself a little ... hah). I especially like the lines where you talk about the half full glasses and the brainwashing with a positive attitude. Can't help but wonder how many times I've pondered why people do that. Oh! And I like your very last stanza as well. :}

    - SilverMilk

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  • on So What by dave ochs, on May 29
    I'm very new to poetry, but this piece really intrigued me. Intrigued? Okay. I thought it was interesting because it was so blunt and ... bam. Straightforward? Sure. It's so truthful and awesome ... great. :}

    - SilverMilk